Things I need to work on.

          The biggest problem I'm having is citing, so for the next two weeks I will integrate more sources into my paper as well as include citing where it is missing. I have to go back and discuss A Beautiful Mind with specific details. I am going to try and include a film still, since my paper needs to be longer. I need to compare the treatments in the film to real life treatments and discuss whether they actually work. This weekend I will take time to look for better sources and fix my errors.